I just wrote something. Honest to goodness something
for the first time in months. There’s just one problem: It’s the end of the story and I have no idea how it starts.
Actually, that’s a lie. I do
know how it starts, because it starts with the ending and it goes a little like this:
The gun’s warm in my hands.
I didn’t think it would be.
I didn’t think it would smell like this, didn’t think it would be so loud, didn’t think you’d really just… fall like that.
And I didn’t think it would be so quiet afterwards, and so dark. I think the world’s just ended. I think my world was all wrapped up in you – hidden away, tied and tangled in your veins, swimming through your blood. I think it was all there and it’s gone now.
I killed you. I’m so sorry. I killed you and I just can’t see this ending any other way. If I stood here and re-played it in my head – re-lived every scene, spoke every word again – it would still end up this way. You’d still be there, dead at my feet, and the gun would still be warm in my hands.
I’m so sorry.
And that’s great and everything. I really embrace that sense of inevitability and the death and the onset of angst... I just wish I knew what caused it. Should anyone feel like speculating, please do so here in this handy poll:
And just because I'm loving the answers to the poll so far, I'm going to post them so I can respond.
theemdash -- Best friends driven apart by a simple thing as a stolen pair of shoes.
Oooh, and then she strips them from the body and walks off down the alleyway! I like.
everydayjoy -- okay I don't know, but whoa: that is *powerful*
:D *feels ego expand*
flippyfrog -- LORF RYN!!!! that is all :D
O.o ...It so could be.
burgotastic -- I don't know why, but I've never really been a fan of 1st Person perspective. Please re-write and resubmit 2/10
Only if you re-submit your comment in third person perspective too.
crazedturkey -- crazedturkey gratuitously wasting tax payers money. :D
Yes, it all makes sense. "How dare you waste my hard-earned tax dollars that way?" BANG.
violentstylings -- Hmmmmm... maybe a brooding tale of a person's self doubt and inability to fit in the world, and all the events that push that person right to the edge... right up until the day they eat that off fruit salad, and something clicks.... and then 'bang bang'.
I can see that happening, especially the brooding bit. Too many people have been driven insane by a bit rancid apple and a spot of mould on a piece of banana.
danceswithelvis -- Truthfully it all reminds me of this song: http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/aha/ivebeenlosingyou.html So mayhap, the killer ends up sitting around and talking to the victim a bit more before shuffling off into the sunset.
Those lyrics are an almost uncanny commplement. Wow. And I can definitely see the killer telling their victim the story of their demise, too.
the_wanlorn -- He told her he preferred Superman to Batman.
gravityslave -- In relationships, little things get big quickly. They had been highschool sweethearts, she'd known nothing else, but her mother's recipe for fruit salad was better than his and he could never admit it...
Such a common, tragic tale. People think fruit salad's a harmless, healthy dessert but they're so very, very wrong.
pitkat -- Sworn enemies in a duel of inevitability – a showdown if you will. Now that the duel is over and one is left standing, he/she realizes that it was all in vein to begin with because he/she is left with no purpose. Or, maybe it's me and my thesis. ;)
Oooh, but I like that. Driven to the point of insanity, a writer's thesis takes on human form and she stalks it through the streets - determined to win, determined to bring it to her will...
alankria -- I'm pretty sure there was an antelope in there somewhere.
I'm pretty sure there is, too. Good call.
Mostly, I just feel like dancing like a loon because I wrote something. A whole... one hundred and fifty words. Oooh, that was nicely rounded off. :D
Also, I would like to make a public service announcement to the effect that crazedturkey
committed an egregious abuse of tax-payer money earlier this evening and everyone should be aware of this fact.