I like the sould of the world you have created. Music is saved for the elite, and yet Jeannie was unaware, and made a slave? What a complex society. I love the various societies created in fiction (specifically sci-fi fntasy). Its all just so damn interesting. Very very good for a first draft.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2006-06-14 02:22 pm (UTC)Its all just so damn interesting.
Very very good for a first draft.