Well... I'd like there to be more, but I guess it does stand alone quite well. The story wanted to head backwards at this point, despite the fact I have no idea what's happened prior to this point. But after your suggestion, I'm kinda leaning towards a sort of split where the past and the future of the story blend together.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2008-07-09 01:33 pm (UTC)Hmm.