That's a highly-plausible fruit salad scenario - I like it. :D
I can't quite decide if I'm glad it works as a stand-alone or not. On the one hand, it is kinda neat that I have this self-contained story of 150 words; on the other hand, I really want it to stand as a hook to draw people in to the rest of the story. I guess I'll just see what happens.
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on 2008-07-10 01:03 am (UTC)I can't quite decide if I'm glad it works as a stand-alone or not. On the one hand, it is kinda neat that I have this self-contained story of 150 words; on the other hand, I really want it to stand as a hook to draw people in to the rest of the story. I guess I'll just see what happens.
And inbox spammage is never a bad thing. :D